This poem
is shares something with sonnet 130, the theme of unconditional love. Although this
poem does not tell a story or have a deeper meaning or even have the diction of
Shakespeare’s sonnet; to me it seems Julie Martinez writes exactly what love
should feel like. To “trace scars” and “memorize birthmarks” sounds like the
speaker knows every single detail about their lover inside and out. Their love
is unyielding and everlasting. There is no boundary on their love. It just
seems to grow and will never vanquish. Love will not disappear; it is people
who do not appreciate love that decide to push it away. Love can creep upon
someone and be laying the bed next to someone after a wild night at a club. Love
can creep upon you when you glance at someone sitting in the window of a coffee
shop. Love can creep upon you when you first hold hands with your life long
best friend. What’s special about love is when it stays so long and is as loud
and powerful as your wedding song playing in the background at your 50th
anniversary. This poem reminds readers what it is like to really feel love. It reminds readers of the
butterflies that swarm their tummy because they are desperately and hopelessly
in love with someone. Love can make you go crazy and make you feel pure bliss
at the same time. “I want you imperfections, raw and tender so easy to love.” The
speaker is truly in love to the point where flaws are attractive to them. Julie
Martinez, in my opinion is a "typical" writer. She writes what the majority of teenage girls want to read when they have a broken heart;
however it will not make them stop and think. Overall this poem shows true passion. This poem gives cold shivers and can tug
on their romantic heart strings to make their heart skip a beat. This poem is
simple yet beautiful.
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